Excerpts From Interviews With Mark Doty Essay
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interview was conducted by Mark Wunderlich in November, 1998
In an article you published in the Hungry Mind Review about your experience as a
judge for the Lenore Marshall Prize, you discussed your hopes for the future of American
Poetry. I’m wondering if you could talk a little more about that. Also, and this may be
impossible to answer, but I’m curious to know what vision you have for the future of your
own work? What are your current ambitions?
Mark Doty: I wrote the article
you mention after reading a great many collections of poetry publishing during 1996 and
97, and I wanted both to complain about a certain tepidness in much of the poetry I was
reading and to praise something else about it, which I would describe as a kind of formal
open-mindedness. This is something I’ve been seeing increasingly as I travel and meet
students in writing programs around the country. It seems to me there is very little pure
allegiance to one kind of practice, to one school or another; the young writers I’m
meeting want to forge a means of getting their individuality on the page, and in order to
do so they seem just as likely to write a sonnet as they do a narrative poem, or a
non-narrative piece with a less referential quality. I think that’s hugely exciting; the
blurring of boundaries points towards larger possibilities to come in American poetry over
the next decade or three. I think we might see fewer camps, and more individual,
alchemical fusions of esthetic strains present in our poetry now. That’s my hope. And I
fervently hope, too, that we will not settle for an esthetic practice that leaves out the
social and the political. I, for one, am hungry to read poems of American life now, in all
its messy complications, with its terrors and uncertainties and possible grounds for hope.
Which leads me to the second part of your
question, about my desires for my own work. I’ve written a good deal, in recent years,
along intensely personal lines. Those poems move through my own experiences of grief to
connect with readers’ experiences of the evanescence of what we love—or at least I
hope they do! The work of the poet investigating personal experience is always to find
such points of connection, to figure out how to open the private out to the reader. On one
level, those were social and political poems, since they deal with a highly charged,
politically defined phenomenon, the AIDS epidemic—or at least with the effects of
that epidemic in my life. But the poems go about that work in a personal, day-to-day way,
more individual than global.
I’m wanting my own poems to turn more towards the
social, to the common conditions of American life in our particular uncertain moment. I
am, I guess, groping towards those poems; I’m trying to talk about public life without
resorting to public language. I am trying to address what scares and preoccupies me now.
The project seems fraught with peril—part of the reason we don’t write political
poems in America is that most of us feel, well, what do I know? What authority do I have
to speak? Where does my connection to any broad perspective on social life lie? I don’t
see myself ever becoming a polemical poet, or writing to advance a particular cause, but
at the same time I can’t believe that it’s okay for us to go on tending our private
gardens while there is so much around us demanding to be addressed.
like to talk a little more about the notion of the political in poetry. In what ways is a
poem a suitable vessel for a political subject? What is it that a poem can do with a
political subject that another form of writing or discourse can’t? I suspect it may have
something to do with the way in which poetry engages the reader…
Doty: I’ve been talking about
this a lot in print lately—in an essay in the Boston Review this summer, which
responds to Harold Bloom’s introduction to the Best of the Best American Poetry
anthology, and in an argument-in-print with my friend J.D. McClatchy, which will appear in
the new incarnation of the James White Review this winter. It occurs to me that my
sense of what political poetry consists of is to some degree generational; I’m young
enough (or old enough, depending on your point of view) to have been shaped by the notion
that the personal is political. When I talk about political poetry, I mean that
work which is attentive to the way an individual sense of identity is shaped by collision
with the collective, how one’s sense of self is defined through encounter with the social
world. Such a poem doesn’t necessarily deal with, say, the crisis in Bosnia or America’s
brutal mishandling of the AIDS epidemic, though it might be concerned with these things.
Though it does do more than occupy the space of the lyric "I"; it is interested,
however subtly, in the encounter between self and history.
In this sense, many of the poems I love best are
political poems. Bishop’s "The Moose", for instance, is a brilliant evocation of
an experience in which an outsider, defined by her separation from those perennial family
voices droning on in the back of the bus, suddenly has a mysterious experience of
connection, of joining a community of inarticulate wonder in the face of otherness. The
isolation of the speaker in the proem to "The Bridge" is not just an existential
loneliness; he’s waiting in the cold "under the shadows of Thy piers" for a
reason, which has to do with his position as a sexual other. That the great steel rainbow
of the bridge arcs over him there is no accident; his otherness is an essential
condition which helps to create the joy he feels in the transcendent promise of the
What these poems can do which discursive writing
cannot is dwell in that rich imaginative territory of the interior connection, in
imaginative engagement with the troubling fact of self-in-the-world. I don’t really
believe there is such a thing as "pure" esthetics; the esthetic is always a
response, a formulation, an act of resisting outer pressure, or rewriting the narratives
And you’re right, it is about engaging the
reader. Not with our opinions about things, but with our felt involvement in the world,
the self’s inextricable implications with culture and time.
[. . . .]
Wunderlich: I am curious to hear why you think poetry survives as an
art form today. It seems to me that the most perfect art form would probably be film
making: You get to use visual images, sound, music, the spoken voice, actors, etc. Why
when we have so many choices of kinds of art-making, do people still keep returning to
Doty: Poetry certainly doesn’t have the "totalizing" quality
that film does, a medium which just surrounds one and hostages the viewer’s attention. It
lacks painting’s immediacy, or photography’s odd marriage of the esthetic and the palpable
sense of the "real." One would think that our late-century engagement with arts
which combine media, which seek a sort of seamless experience for the viewer, would
supplant poetry. But far from it. My sense is that, while still a minority preference,
poetry is thriving. Audiences for readings increase, a great deal of poetry is published,
and it seems that among young people especially there is genuine interest in and respect
for the art.
Who knows why? My guess is that somehow poetry is a vessel for the expression of
subjectivity unlike any other; a good poem bears the stamp of individual character in a
way that seems to usher us into the unmistakably idiosyncratic perceptual style of the
writer. I think we’re hungry for singularity, for those aspects of self that aren’t
commodifiable, can’t be marketed. In an age marked by homogenization, by the manipulation
of desire on a global level (the Gap in Houston is just like the Gap in Kuala Lumpur, it
seems), poetry may represent the resolutely specific experience. The dominant art forms of
our day—film, video, architecture—are collaborative arts; they require a team of
makers. Poems are always made alone, somewhere out on the edge of things, and if they
succeed they are sa urated with the texture of the uniquely felt life.
from The Cortland Review (December 1998).
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Bolick: In the book [Firebird] you write about your
"education in beauty," beginning with your sister’s tantalizing drawer of shiny
trinkets: crepe and tulle, glittery ribbons, "scraps of sheer and sparkled
treasure." Could you talk about what beauty meant to you as a child How has
your relationship to beauty and artifice changed over time?
Doty: I guess I was bored very early on by what seemed to me the plain
nature of the clothes and toys and roles handed out to little boys. I saw no future for
myself there. The sort of stuff my sister kept in her special drawer of souvenirs was
redolent of something else — exuberance, playfulness, permission. They appeared beautiful
to me because they evoked other possibilities, something secretive and forbidden and rich
I grew up in a very disconnected suburban landscape, in town after town, and it seems
to me that there was very little that existed in order to enchant, to instruct us in our
larger possibilities, to engage the spirit. There was, in other words, little art, and a
great deal of practicality, of ways of life determined by social and economic necessity,
or social and economic ambition. My love of that shiny stuff in the drawer was, I think, a
kind of early outbreak of longing — a wish for life to be something more. That took other
forms later on, of course, or I’d simply have become a drag queen rather than a poet!
My relationship to artifice has changed in very complex ways. The little boy at his
sister’s secret drawer is interested in what’s pretty. The sort of beauty that interests
me now is something more revealing of character — a very personal sort of beauty, often a
failed sort. I am drawn to the ways people reinvent themselves or the world in which they
find themselves — how the make order and harmony out of the chaos or uncertainty
that surrounds them. There’s a character in Firebird, for instance, an old man I
met when I was a teenager, who built a homemade grotto he called The Valley of the Moon.
He had taken broke dishes and cement, scraps of old toys, and stones found in the
desert and cobbled them all together into a sort of version of paradise that was intended
to represent, and perhaps to preserve, innocence. It was something of a mess, a bit
haphazard and piecemeal, and yet it seemed to me strikingly beautiful, a mark of an
individual sensibility in the world.
Bolick: Your poems — noted for their lyrical language and wealth of
detail — have been criticized for being overly concerned with adjectives and "word
stitchery," as a recent reviewer put it. What do you think accounts for the critical
resistance to beautiful surfaces in your work? Do you pay any heed to the charges?
Doty: There is an interesting bias toward the plain, the unadorned;
what is plain and straightforward is often equated with what is true. I have real doubts
about this; I don’t think it’s necessarily the case that the best way to describe reality
is by stripping things down to essentials.
I believe that reality cannot be captured in language, period. It’s too complex, too
shifty, too difficult to know and to say. I think that reality can be approached, pointed
to, suggested, and that the more stylistic means one has at one’s disposal the better.
That’s why, in the title poem of my book Atlantis, there are a number of sections
that circle around the same core — around experiences that I believe are fundamentally
unsayable. But I try. I try it plain, colloquial; try it elevated, formal; try it through
narrative; try it through lyric; try it through metaphor. So formal density is one
strategy, both in Atlantis and in Sweet Machine, but there are
other poems, in both books, which are drop-dead direct. "The Embrace," for
instance, from the last book, is as plainspoken a poem as I will ever write; its mode of
speech felt right for the gravity of its occasion. But I’d hate the idea tha every
poem ought to be that uncompromisingly plain.
The gendered nature of this criticism is interesting, I think. The charge is
"word-stitchery," not "word-welding" or
"word-carpentry." The implication is that this craft is something feminine and
trivial, as opposed to the more masculine and worthy work of plain speech. I suppose that
part of my queerness is an interest in made surfaces, surfaces of all kinds, and the
inevitable discordance between that surface and the core, between the speech and what it
Bolick: I’m interested in your attention to rupture — the rent in the
surface, the fractured shell. In Heaven’s Coast you use the image of a
crack in a delicate cup soldered with a seam of gold as a metaphor for the way loss first
sh tters, then alters us. Did you come to this idea of fractured beauty through your
experiences with grief?
Doty: You’re right, this is a profound fascination with me. It
precedes my experience with grief — I feel as if I came into the world with this
preoccupation. In part it’s that the complete, the entirely achieved, doesn’t seem to need
my attention. You can look at, say, an ancient Greek sculpture, or a superb carved wo den
staff from Ghana, and say, "Yes, that’s complete in itself, whole." But I am
always drawn to those things that aren’t intact, those that bear some evidence of limit or
failure. Perhaps it’s just that this is a sort of beauty I think I might be able to
And it may be, too, that this is something with deep psychological roots. We all
experience a disjunction, sometime early on, between our interiority — the deep, luminous
world of inside — and the way other people see us. That original experience of
recognizing that we may not seem to be what we are seems to me one of the primary social
experiences — it happens sometime around the beginning of school, at age six or so. I
suspect it has even further implications for gay kids, who learn that they have within
them a crucial difference that others cannot necessarily see. We were talking
before about surface and core — I think this is where a fascination with that tension
originates. Think about all the little gay boys who grow up to be so involved with decor,
appearance, staging, style. Such practices all involve an attention to the tension between
what something is and what it seems to be — a kind of rupture.
from "Fallen Beauty" in Atlantic Unbound — http://www.theatlantic.com/unbound/interviews/ba991110.htm
Interview with Michael Glover
It was two years ago that I first read a book by a remarkable young
American poet called Mark Doty. He was completely unknown in this country. His poems had a
compassionate, lyrical urgency, a descriptive and metaphorical power that was
more exciting than anything I’d read from America since the death of Robert Lowell in the
Last month Doty came to Britain to lodge in a converted pigsty at the
Arvon Foundation in Totleigh, Devon, and do what he regularly does at the University of
Utah: teach poetry to aspiring poets. He is one of a species that is common in the United
States, but rare and often regarded with some suspicion over here: the professional,
His schedule at Utah is relatively light he teaches two days a week from
January to June. But the rest of his income comes from workshops and fees for his many
poetry readings, as well as from grants and book royalties. In Devon, he says, it was
"very intense". With 16 student poets, he "spent all day, every day, doing
workshops and writing exercises, talking about poems, reading poems – theirs and
Isn’t it bad for poets to spend so much of their time thinking and talking
about the art? Shouldn’t they have some life outside poetry so that, when they return to
it, they have something to write about?
"What’s good is that I get to participate in a conversation about the
art," he said, when we met at the Poetry Society in London’s Covent Garden. He speaks
in a gentle, insistent voice. "Of course, talking about poetry and writing it are two
very different things, but there’s something about that dialogue between teacher and
student that is nurturing for me as a writer. I enjoy that kind of structured contact with
other people and their stories, with their struggles to shape themselves on the
Reading poetry to audiences, he says, helps his writing. "I learn
about new poems in the process of reading aloud. You listen differently when you’re
reading to an audience – it’s as if part of you is in that audience listening to that new
poem. You hear weaker lines, glitches, rhythmic problems, and that helps in the revision
process. Of course, the real work of poetry happens when one reader is alone with one book
because, when we read a poem by ourselves, we can stop and start, daydream about what
we’ve just read, take time to examine. What you hear in a poetry reading is always the
skin of a poem. You can’t apprehend the depths and complexities of a good poem when it’s
simply read to you once."
He thinks of himself "as a literary writer with roots in a tradition
that values complexity and a certain sort of thickness of language; a poetry I hope that
can’t be gotten in one hearing."
But why was poetry worth listening to anyway? Why was it so humanly
valuable? "Poetry is a kind of distillation of individuality amidst a world where the
unique, the one-off, is at some risk. Driving through Devon this morning, I was startled
to come upon a branch of Staples, an American office supply chain, a store that you can
walk into in almost any medium-sized city in the States. Let that stand for the
universalisation and standardisation of so many kinds of experience. Poetry is absolutely
resistant to that . . ."
So poetry is a bulwark against consumerism? "It is in a way. Of
course there is a tiny degree in which poetry can be commodified and sold, but it can also
of course be endlessly xeroxed, published on the Internet, memorised and possessed by many
people. And what is a poem but a sort of replica or model of an individual process of
knowing, and since each of us knows a little bit differently, and each of us has that
combination of voice and internal rhythm and ways of seeing which are capable of making
something idiosyncratically and unmistakably ours, then the poem keeps putting the self
into the forefront in a way which is profoundly valuable . . ."
Poetry, then, establishes a kind of world-wide community of interior
lives? "That would be my hope, yes, that it continues to put interiority into the
foreground. Also, happily, a poem can’t just live in the interior. If it did it would be
perhaps just a journal entry. It might just be solipsistic. Or purely private. The best
poems, real poems, reach out to include readers, and so they model the process of
interiority meeting the exterior, the self in a community. Hooray for that . . ."
Doty’s voice sounds Southern – and that’s where his forebears come from.
His mother’s family, Irish immigrants who left during the potato famine, settled in
Sweet-water, Tennessee. "My great-grand-mother remembered riding in the back of a
covered wagon from Georgia to Tennessee, fleeing Sherman’s return march. They were
dirt-poor millet farmers."
Doty’s parents left the rural South at the beginning of the second world
war. His father was an army engineer, so they moved from town to town, sometimes in the
South, sometimes in the West, from one anonymous place to another. "I grew up with a
sense that home was something one constructed or carried around inside. I grew up loving
books because they were reliable company. You could take them with you . . ."
Aged 16, Doty met a poet, realised that "poetry might be a way to
live" and enrolled at the University of Tucson, Arizona. He then dropped out, married
at the age of 18, got into school teaching, graduated and took an intensive poetry course.
He didn’t begin to accept that he was gay until 1981. He gave up on a bad
and stultifying marriage and, with $600 in his pocket, headed to Manhattan. "I got a
job as a secretary," he says, "and began what seemed to me a real life because
in my early twenties, like many gay men of my generation, I had been in flight from my
sexuality. I had issues of identity to work out before I could begin to live a life that
was founded in something more authentic . . ."
He had two poetry collections published. Then his life and work were
dramatically changed by the discovery that his lover, Wally Roberts, was HIV-positive.
Wally’s subsequent decline, culminating in his death in 1994, transfigured Doty’s art
rather as the intimate and terrible experience of war transfigured Wilfred Owen’s 80 years
In two poetry collections – My Alexandria and Atlantis -
and a prose memoir entitled Heaven’s Coast, Aids became, in Doty’s words,
"the great intensifier", and the poetry itself an increasingly anguished and
complicated negotiation with imminent death. During Wally’s decline, the couple settled in
Provincetown at the very tip of Cape Cod; in the poems that little town, with its salt
marsh and shifting dunes, seems to embody the very idea of transience.
I asked Doty how his poetry – and his image of that coastal town (he still
lives there for six months of the year) – had changed since Wally’s death. After the
removal of the Damoclean sword, what next? "Well, the poems I have found myself
writing over the last two years are much less about grief than they are about a passage
back to participation in the world, about the renewal of that contract that we make with
life to be a part of things. In some ways I think these new poems are more public because
they are less involved with some desperate negotiation with mortality. I am turning my
attention out to other things. I think they have some different sorts of colour to them,
too, a different music, and a different harmonic character maybe . . ."
But did he see Provincetown differently now? "I’ve spent much less
time there over the past two years. In part, that was because I wanted to clear the slate,
to get away from its intensity and small-town character. It’s a place that’s so fraught
with history for me – not only my life with Wally, but so many people I knew there have
died in such a short period of time. In some ways I feel like I’ve lived there for decades
even though I’ve in fact only lived there for about seven years.
"The character of the community’s changing, too. When I first came
there, it was very much a refuge for people who didn’t expect to live long. Now, because
of new drugs and the sort of strange new hopeful position of the epidemic, suddenly people
aren’t moving to Provincetown planning to die any more . . ."
When I asked him about his politics Doty replied with an uncharacteristic
lack of assurance and fluency. He said that he had consistently voted Democrat but that,
in his heart, he was something much closer to a libertarian. "The places where I’ve
been most politically engaged have been with gay issues, but I think that the best use of
my energies is not in organising but through writing . . .
"That does not mean necessarily writing overtly political poetry,
though. The reason for that is as follows. I’ve mostly written from the principle that I
wanted to make a discovery in the course of writing a poem. If I knew what I thought or
felt, I would be less likely to write because I depend upon the energy of uncovering what
I think and feel about any subject. Which makes political poetry – overtly political
poetry – particularly difficult."
What next? A new collection of poems is due out in America next spring; he
plans to write a prose memoir on his earliest years in the autumn. "It’s a story
about childhood and the love of poetry," he told me. "I bet you didn’t know I
used to do interpretative dances to Stravinsky at the age often, Michael . . ."
No, I hadn’t known, but I could easily have imagined it.
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